Ab aur kisise pyar na hoga,
Tumse hain pyar inkar bhi na hoga,
Hain jo pyar toh laut aao vapas
Aur ab tumhara intezar na hoga.
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Katal karti hain unki har ek adaa
ab aur kitni jaanein bachi hain khuda???
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lagne lagi hain tanhaiya pyari ab,
behte hain ashq aati hain yaad jab
zindagi bojh si lagne lagi hain
najane khatam hoga yeh safar kab???
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8 comments:
oh my a virgin blog:) well it's a nice start... shayari is a b'ful art, why not lighten the background to match the emotional cord?
happy blogging
hey...liked d 2nd one d best...keep writing!
(n yea...m wid akansha..u shud consider chngin d bkgrnd to a subtler shade)
~Sanz
http://sanz360.wordpress.com/
nice shayaari ...kool!!!
keep posting :)
thanks 4 ur comment.. i read ur shayari.. they directly touch ur heart... neways welcome to blog world... its great feeling here..have fun
really romantic lines there - think i will copy some to text my girlfrend (lol)
anyways its really very nice and some nice thought out poetry if its not spontaneous
keep it up girl
the 2nd one was really good..
nice to see some diffrnt thng in the blog world..
keep it up..
aap to javed akhtar to comptt de sakte ho!!! :p
well done.
Wah Wah ...
nice work .... keep up ...
This one is better than ur current ones ...
:)
HI thr...
M really sorry but am nor fluent in hindi. Hence m unable to really comment. However, I will have ppl translate things to me and will comment soon
Tee
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