Zindagi ne Zindagi bhar gam diye,
tasvir di badi aur rang kam diye,
socha tha ishq ki parchhai sang chalegi,
par usne bhi saath sirf saat kadam diye!!!!!
Tinka tinka ho gaye hai armaan saare,
waqt ki dor chhoti pad gayi unhe pirone ke liye!!!
Gairon se kya gila kare jab apne hi apne na rahe
hamein dhoka bhi usise mila jisse zindagi mukammal thi!!!!!
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achha hai
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irshaad irshaad...
waah waah...irshaad irshaad...good ones yaar!
Hmm...Me wrote something on same lines...
Un raaho mein paaya maine apne aap ko
Chiraag bhi kam they jahan roshni ke liye
Lau mili thi dil ke deeye se
Phir bhi anjaan thi nigaahein sacchai se
Siskiyon ne nirjeev kiya marm se,
Zindagi nammin hui geele kaagaz mein
koi jalata bhi nahin koi bahata bhi nahin,
is qadar hain akele rahaon mein dil ki,
koi bulata bhi nahi koi batlata bhi nahin
Auron ne toh kya Rangon ne bhi bewaafai ka saath diya !!!!
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘हाल-ऐ-दिल॥’ took my particular attention. aap ki shayriyo ne toh hume deewana bana diya hai...
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
lovely lovely. and ur gettin lot of comments also. sahi! :)
This is the 1st Hindi blog I have read..sahi hai!
Impressed..with the shayari, reminds me of some Jaggit Singh Ghazal..dunno which one though!
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