Jee rahe hain hum sirf jeene ki khaatir,
teri bewafai ne toh hamein kabka maar daalaa..........
Saaya bhi ab paraaya sa lagata hain
to aur kisi ke apnane ki kyaa umeed........
Shiddat se tujhse mohabbat karte hain sanam,
le lena imtehaan dil chaahe jab.........
4 comments:
to b honest my por hindi dint let me undrstand yo poem fully
but im sure those who write poems write it well
chhers n gud luck
It is a very nice poem! :)
Keep up the good work!
Anindita. ^^
just loved it keep rocking!!!!
Saaya bhi ab paraaya sa lagata hain
to aur kisi ke apnane ki kyaa umeed........
bus in do lines me rhyming kam laga..
shayad aisa likhte:
"Saaya bhi ab paraaya sa lagata hain
to aur kisi ko apna banane ki kya umeed"
Rest lines r awesome
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